Tuesday, November 02, 2010

The Train

I have read, heard about this like many times till now. If you ever want to become a director you should be a good story teller. This is my first approach in writing stories rather telling a story (written).

Precautions  :
This could be a story you probably heard.Since, I make stories out of stories. You might seen the same stories as I did so might look completely familiar.


Story :


My story also starts at a Station as most of Indian movies.

Its  6 O clock  in  the morning, Adi walks into the station with his jacket and scarf around his neck.Its dark and cold outside with the sky about to turn blue.Adi looks for train at the track. After few minutes,he sees a light from the far right coming towards him. He goes closer to the track. The Hog head honks at adi watching him being closer to the track as he pulls the train into the station, A huge block of wind pushes adi  but adi tries to stay put blocking the wind.Trains comes to a halt, doors slide and people come out of train pushing adi to the left and right.Train waits at the station for 15 seconds, doors slide in and train pulls out of the station.Adi still standing at the same place shows sense of discomfort on his face and looks for another train to pull in.After few minutes, adi sees another train pulling in,Seeing the train adi gets and moves more closer to the track as if he is about to jump. adi frees himself and gets ready for the train.As the train pulls in the station adi tries to jump on the track to commit suicide pushes his right leg to make a jump  but a  sweet little voice shouts at him,
Hey you ??
Adi turns towards her with sense of discomfort on his face but as soon as he watches. Huge block of wind blows against them trying to move them but both of them stay put.Adi watches her as she is setting up her hair.Doors slide, people come out of the train, pushing both of them, walking in between them but adi doesn't let his eyes go away from her,all the pains and complications in his life seem to go away for a second by just looking at the beautiful face as she says, Dude, you  slipped your wallet

Oh, yeah thank you.

For the next few days adi comes to the  same station just  to talk to her every day .After few months,They both fall in love and  lived happily ever after.


Cheers !!

Peace !!

4 comments:

Laurotic said...

AHHH I need some update :)

vemuri said...

he he I will for sure..

thnx Laurotic, IS that your name or do u prefer that name or do u have any other name.

Laurotic said...

hehe my name its Laura :)
and I ended up creating my blogspot because I found your quite interesting ;)

Laurotic said...

hehe my name its laura, I live in Florida I'm 20. Nice to meet ya :)